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Post by Nathaniel A. Rosenberg on Oct 11, 2007 17:26:45 GMT 1
Nate quickly conducted a fast inspection. He stepped next to one of the footprints, to see if it was only one person. After he was done with this he nodded to the wookie's idea.
- You are right, we should head out.
If there were no more questions or suggestions, Rosenberg lead the team out.
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Post by Ray Gomez on Oct 15, 2007 20:13:24 GMT 1
The little company saw a man or something two footer prints who was in the playground. It was clear, that somebody grabbed the child, and took her with him to the desert. Ray took a look around, but he only saw the footprints, nothing else. Some of them thought that, they should follow the path, where the girl may be there. But the gran's mind didn't think that stupid rescue trip, he wanted that hopeless woman for slave, she could be in his house and washing up the floor with a dirty toothbrush, she seems useful.
But...
Deep in his hearth, he fel that, this will be a very evil thing, to do with that woman. He is the sub-leader of the Alliance of Free Races, no discrimination, equal rights, blabalbla... The businessman take a long look to the woman.
- The water doesn't matter Syylk, have you got a husband who can help? - Asked Ray from the woman.
//I really hope, that the woman is pretty too, not only useful ;D//
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Post by Sruthan Alex on Oct 25, 2007 10:12:27 GMT 1
Alex just listened and didn't tell anything. He followed the group and he cheked the playground with the others. Than (this was the first time) he started to speak. 'The water ain't necessary 'cause the night is cold. And we have the all night. But we should have a flashlight or something.' said. He was very tired already but he would have liked to help.
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Post by Veszély on Nov 11, 2007 8:33:22 GMT 1
Since Gaelb deleted himself of the message borad, I think it ain't necessary to wait anymore.
First, here come the corrections:
Syylk: Congrats for the language exam. Yours was a very well written post, save a few mistypings. Keep up the good work.
Nate: "nodded" is two 'd'-s, I guess you mistyped it. Besides, it was a flawless post.
Ray: Well, you made some mistakes, and, I have to admit, I couldn't get the sense of your very first sentence. You also have some minor mistypings. In fact, there are two things, you have to remember in the future.
"The water is doesn't matter Syylk,": is and does are both auxiliary verbs, and you hardly ever have them together in a phrase. In this context, 'is' is not needed.
"where the girl may be there": 'where' and 'there' both point to a location, so you only have to use one of them in this (or in any) sentence.
Alex: "'The water doesn't necessary ": it's not 'doesn't', it's 'isn't' (or more likely ain't in spoken language)! Also, since you use past tense, in this case, you shouldn't have used "he liked to help," because it generally means that he liked to help people. The correct for is: "He would have liked to help."
Also, a hint of vocabulary: lamp is a bigger object, which stands beside your bed, our hangs from the ceiling. what you need, is a flashlight
Keep up the good work, guys!
The woman was clearly surprised, when she heard the gran's question, and she was right: she being or not being married wasn't in any connection with poor little Aleesa's kidnapping.
- No, I am not. Or... not anymore. Why do you ask? Can you save my poor little baby?
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Post by Nathaniel A. Rosenberg on Nov 11, 2007 10:27:02 GMT 1
"Would you mind?" -Nate burst out to the gran- "If you don't want to help then just go away. But don't upset her anymore."
The gran was very suspicious for the Jedi Padawan, and he could no longer keep this a secret.
"Someone, get us a flashlight or anything that we can use in the dark" - then he turned to the woman - "Don't worry, we will do our best, to find Aleesa."
Nate tried to calm her while waiting for someone to get the necessary equipment.
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Post by Veszély on Dec 22, 2007 8:24:39 GMT 1
The moon on the skies of Tatooine shines bright: you don't really need the flashlight. The only thing left to do before you start out is to decide who is in and who is not.
I'm sad the interest for this module has dropped so heavily. Still, I do not want to cut it in the middle. You can expect my next post sometime next week. Those, who fail to post a message until that point, will be banned from the module, and will not have the possibility to join up later. The caaracters will not be hurt, they simply return to Mos Espa.
Thank you for your understanding.
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Post by Ray Gomez on Dec 22, 2007 8:52:22 GMT 1
- I want to help too. - Ray said to the man. - We don't need flaslight or torch, the sun shines our path. - Then let's move guys, we must find her daughter. The gran walked two footsteps and stopped. If he helps may the he can took a good impression into clanmates and another volunteer helpers.
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Post by Syylk on Dec 22, 2007 12:15:25 GMT 1
'<All right, we've got everything we need, so let's go.>
The wookiee summarized the situations, than take a quick look to the others. He knew that Nate will come - because he really looked concerned about the problem, and surprisingly Ray looked very helpful, too. Syylk suspected that there is something what he doesn't know about, but he didn't care, yet. Slowly he started to move in the way of the desert...
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Post by Nathaniel A. Rosenberg on Dec 24, 2007 10:50:30 GMT 1
Nate didn't like the idea of Ray joining them, still he thought, that the gran could be useful if the situation went wrong. He nodded to the wookie and embarked on the journey.
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Post by Sruthan Alex on Jan 2, 2008 1:49:21 GMT 1
Alex waited until the others became calmed. Than just silently nodded, and joined to the company. 'Than, let's go.' said. He didn't care, who come and who not, he didn't know anybody. But more helper are better.
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Post by Veszély on Feb 20, 2008 14:01:56 GMT 1
Im sorry for skipping quite a lot of time. From this point on, I will post regularily. However, since my studies restrict my free time, I won't be correcting your mistakes. If you need any help in composing or grammar, feel free to ask me in a PM or via MSN. Thank you. Now let's get back to action. Or more correctly, this is where the action starts.
The llama-like creature, who arrived alongside you shrugs, and without a word he returns to Mos Espa. After all, he turned out not to be so helpful as he seemed to be at first sight. But, the rest of you stand there as one, prepared to save the lady's poor little Aleesa. The woman bursts out in tears, and she cannot stop expressing her gratitude. 'Thank you, thank you all. Please return safely.'
It's nearly midnight when you finally set off into the desert. The three moons of the planet and the stars together make following the footprints easy. And also, you have time to get acquainted with each other while walking.
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Post by Nathaniel A. Rosenberg on Feb 22, 2008 19:37:35 GMT 1
The journey was a long one and the silence started to become awkward, so Nathaniel decided to break the ice.
"We need to do this as a team" - he said turning back to the others. - "We should know what the other is capable of. As you might have already noticed I am a warrior. A mercenary if you will. I can use a blaster and this nice vibrosword" - he pointed at his weapon on his back. - "You guys?"
He continued to trek, back from time to time looking back at his companions.
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Post by Syylk on Mar 1, 2008 17:49:48 GMT 1
The weather could be more comfortable, but Syylk was used to extreme situations. But the weather wasn't the biggest problem. The silence was awkward indeed, and this plus the threating -maybe fake- calmness of the desert resulted that the wookiee was close to do something irrational: like firing a gun just to break that. But, fortunately Nate acted faster. He said a sentence, to which the Syylk immadiately answered:
'<Agreed. I'm strong, I mean really strong, and I can use my gun. So I'm sort of a warrior myself. >'
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Post by Veszély on May 21, 2008 13:27:03 GMT 1
Nearly an hour passed as you were following the footprints in the sand. You all got to know each other little by little, as you enjoyed each other's company. The time was around midnight, the twin-moons at the peak of their orbital track, when a sudden, roaring voice filled the nocturnal silence. The sky got darker, as, from the north, a huge wall of sand rose. A sandstorm was approaching you...
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Post by Nathaniel A. Rosenberg on Jun 30, 2008 17:12:16 GMT 1
The small party of adventurers went on their journey, while talkinb about themselves to keep them entertained. As Nate was leading the team, he was the first to perceive the signs of a sandstorm coming straight at them. Ha quickly fastened his cape around himself grabbing the cloak.
- Everyone, get ready! This is going to be a tough ride! Close your eyes and mouths, try to breeth only through clothing!
Rosenberg tried to use his left elbow to somehow break the strong waves of sand coming infront of them.
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